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the crucifix reference is because Jesus was willing to give anything for those he loved. This poem is essentially an extension of that idea--that the narrator just wishes for a ...

I tried out and left in disgust.

haha, no worries. I only posted this because people kept asking. I hardly noticed I left :p

some new members may not know me, but this thread isn't for them :p. I disappeared mysteriously after the summer, and have now returned. Since people were asking, I decided ...

EDIT: sorry about that, it's back now. Love Is Blue and-I-fell-in- ..... with gasping breaths and crucifix arms thrown wide. Sodden clothes as magnets to a sea bed I'm just ...

First off, read this: Now, what we have here is a nice little poem about stars and dancing through the sky and happy times. All is well, right? Wrong. You ...

All except for Paulsies, who's is from mid-early years :p Thanks for the feedback! It's too late to fix the chin and hair, but I'll definitely keep that in mind ...

Atrophy For Lovers, Amorphy For Others. Steal my breath at gunpoint, CO2 for your finger-knit sack. Pawn it off, pull it out in lungfulls; (oxidized and in your eyes) this ...

Rhyming can add flair and fun to poetry, yes, but it is still a restriction. Here you are clearly bound by your decision to have a rhyme scheme, and that's ...

*points to avatar* enough said

it used to be I would think of a line or two and just write those down and build off them. But in the past few months, I haven't been ...

EDIT: UPDATED! Scroll down down down for delicious new things. Sorry for the flooding. :p

Back, perhaps. We'll see :)

Just a note: while irregular linebreaks can add wonders to poetry, they can be equally devastating if ill-used. I love the fact that you're going against the grain and having ...

I ripped up the T-O-T field as a Jester, and then I'm throwing a Halloween party tomorrow, where we'll go trick or treating once again, just to see if we'll ...