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AHHH!! I remebered the poem that this one made me think of. Better yet, I found it! Here yeah go -- Same sort of format, but better flowyness. If yah ...

I checked out this thread merely because I love your name (amazing band, dontcha know). And what do I find upon entering? Talent. Your amazing at drawing (eyes especially) and ...

You've got a foundation here, and that's certainly something to work with. The general idea of this is...cliche. A lot of the lines are cliche as well. If you were ...

I'd like to say your work ahs grown on me, simply in order to convince myself that I disliked it upon first reading. Unfortunately, this is the first piece of ...

Eh... I basically stopped reading after the teacher's second response. It seems like you had an idea that you could paint this beautiful image of two people conversing, both thinking ...

Best writer ever? Most certainly. :D

Hmm...I think I'm gonna have to start reading your poems with 'pop-punk' in mind. Otherwise I'll just write them off as shallow. But yeah, these should prbably be in the ...

To be honest, this sounded like something that a transexu...scratch that. It souded like something that Good Charlotte would write. It was upbeat... but it never really expressed anything. I ...

I rather enjoyed this one. It flowed well, and was certainly Cummings in heart. The images were well-used, as was the particular form. Good job.

It was a fresh form-- I'll give you that. However, is it just me or are there grammar issues in this? Maybe I should ask Meldi... At parts [specifically the ...

Ohh, I haven't seen this one before. I'm curious as to who 'us' is. You start out the poem with a definite 'you' (or my, in this case) yet by ...

Oy-- I suppose this means I shall be gradually integrating these into the system... After I get a few crits outta the way, of course

nah... we don't get rid off him till the morrow; lest I'm mistaken?

Aww, thankee Meldi. But I think the cake should have cream-cheese frosting. 'Tis spectacular

Allo Meldidear. I too have ventured to the haunted, hallowed halls of the YWS. [this is stabby :p]