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GAH!! She's found us!!!! Ullo Toxic. :) [This is Stabs]

Lol. It seemed perfectly sensible, even considering the time. I shall do a decent edit sometime tomorrow, but for now; goodnight.

I've told you my viwes in the chat room, I just thought I'd drop in to commend this publicly :D Extremely well-written. It's tone is haunting. Like watching Salad Fingers ...

"Buckle up sweety," you lace through the smoke. Don't pretend to protect pruned lungs you invoke. I cradle myself in (The perfect little gent), don't flatter yourself, you're a friggin' ...

I really need to stop looking at your work. It makes me feel so unaccomplished

well that introduction was.... sparse. Welcome to YWS, get crittin' :) [I'm Ed]

OMG!!! I don't have time to read it atm (I'll probly get around to it later) but I just love your opening line :D

I found the character wonderfully intriguing. His motive was quite interesting. To the point where I found the cliche boss took aweay from this piece. The crimson necklace throwback at ...

Hmm.. I spose I'd peg this in the 'Other' section at the bottem. Though I spose it is in fact ficticious... Regardless, It was an interesting read. I'm not exactly ...

Ok. I REFUSE to give up on this just yet. It's fun. It get's better. It's actually a good storybook. What's not to love?

yeah gotta love reviving old poems, though :D -crit ticket- (if you so choose)

Thankee much for the crits... Sorry about the ambiguity of it all. Here's the next segment: And then Rod remembered; he had to find the Spare. It had come to ...

Ok, You're completely in the right on the rhyming bit. As for the rest, I suppose we'll just agree to disagree, then?

Eh...I didn't quite finish reading this. Fan fiction is hard enough, but fan fiction poetry? A doozy, for sure. Welllll, The opening stanza was cute, in a simplistic sort of ...

As I was reading this, I kept making mental notes on what to say in a crit. Well, my mind is rather cluttered as it is, so I went with ...