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This was an interesting take to do. I love the jumpyness of this anthology/novel. It reflects my own scatter-mindedness, and is a creative comfort, of sorts. With that being said, ...

Hilary Clinton? -cocks eyebrow- Nice touch, that was. I never new she was capable of compassion , though

Most certainly did. I was thinking far to small-scale. Thankee much

The steak similie seemed out of place. I know you could think of a better one. So kindly do so.

Eh. Watch more Mythbusters. Either a: the landmass wouldn't be dense enough to create a vortex. OR b: it would be, and thus the vortex would suck down immediatley. Regardless, ...

A Uranium bomb strong enough to submerge the entire western coast? Gah. I don't believe it. Plutonium with a water boost? If laced unter the san andreas fault, yeah. But ...

Aggh... major tense issues. But well written, all the same

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Ok, thanks for all the feedback from everyone! It's been most helpful :D And thus I present the revamped, re-scribed version. [edited in first post].

Interesting piece. I was adversed to "Nightingales singing" in here. It seemed so... Ap English induced. And deary me, what ever would henna being doing in the roof of your ...

This concluded most interestingly. I'll say right now: I rather liked it. [the ending] With that being stated, I'll continue my slasher-fest. Your repitition was hodge-podge at best, and painful ...

You've certainly got your views then, don't you? :D You need to work on tying these views into your spectacular imagery; perhaps with haunting, prolific phrases that stand alone when ...

what are the bitty things crawling about the ship n the second picture? I'm most intrigued

This title just made me not want to read it. That may sound presumptious, but it's the truth.

You joined? Sweet. And I'm totally of like mind on the honesty bit. Unless you're honest and wrong. :D jk,jk. I'm Ed. Nice to see we've convinced you.