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Re: Should Hitler go to Hell?
Yes, and I realize that. I was using Arnold to represent the abstract of Authority. It, doubtlessly, will ignore what is morally right by its own standards, and make whatever ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: Why?
Well, I thought the 'My dance is slow' bit was interesting... You asked questions with literally no purpose or answer. They were rhetorical without feeling -- hanging unanswered, dragging this ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: Should Hitler go to Hell?
Assuming that Arnold Schwarzenegger is God (and why shouldn't we?) and that Hitler lead the Cripps, I think this argument can easily be dissected. Cripps leader claims, a day before ...
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Re: Inspirations
Ok, zero responses? Not cool. However, this poem wasn't exactly at the 'cool' mark either. It seemed like you attempting to prove a poor-argued point, and you just ended up ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: Biting the Hand That Feeds
Eh, I often get lip for being honest [read: harsh] in my critiques. Authors seem to think that by pointing out their poem's faults, I'm insulting them on a deep ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: Strawberry Streetcar
Ok, none of your proportions are even close to reality. I love it. It rings with your own unique style, and they're certainly well-drawn. Very good, very good. ~Ed
May 24, 2007 -
Re: Hullo :]
I think I critted something of yours -racks brain- Yes...I'm fairly certain I did. Well then, here's a proper welcome. Welcome. Happy? Have the Omniscient Gods of Greeting been thus ...
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Re: Shakespeare-- Genius or Fraud?
Eh. A hate agreement in debate :p. Normally I get to spout out my opinions in a vehement-yet-reasonable fashion; but here it seems we're all of like mind. His work ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: Lord of The Rings or Harry Potter?
Harry Potter, on the other hand, is fun to read. woopdyfriggindoo. Isn't the point of a book to be fun to read? Tolkein's Lord of the Rings is a breathtakign, ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: Cutting
Whoa... where have I seen this before?!?! Everywhere. And the caps was excesssive at best. It just screams 'mediocre piece that relies on tacky distracting devices to make itself known'. ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: The Prodigal Son
The above has covered the content quite nicely, so rather then doing so I'll launch into one of my rants. Your subtitle gives me ulcers. Not the nice, bubbly, they're-a-hit-at-parties ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: The Fire Within
The main thing that bugged me about this was the last line of the chorus. It seems to be missing a syllable or two [or at least that's how I ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: Existence
You... never even finished this sentence-of-a-poem. You never conveyed what idea might've inspired this. You never even finished up this fragmented series of poorly connected images. What was with the
May 24, 2007 -
Re: psychoneurosis
I can see some weird drama kid acting this out with beret atop his head and overdone hand motions as accompaniment. Ok, work on a singular overall theme to weave ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: .
Ahh.. harshness time. I only got halfway through. And it was a struggle, at that. It was either blatantly cliche, or it sounded like rambling. For the former-- If you're ...
May 24, 2007
