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And so it was that the farmboy became king of Aeraegaesiea, with the once-stubborn princess as his now-ladylike Queen. The ruffneck wandering ranger sailed off to the undying lands, with ...

is that a mystical spork? Well then, that's gonna have to be an 8.3, that is

The rhyming scheme didn't work here. If anything, it detracted from the content and the flow, which isn't good. I'd say go for more vivid imagery. And here I mean ...

a different style then I'm accustomed to, surely. But that doesn't make it bad in it's own way... My main gripe with this was your ending. It fell short of ...

They had bleached the sheets again, of course. The bedfittings always came back, ironed to a fault and with a bitter aftertaste. No matter… there would be plenty of time ...

Zombies + Jesus in a Family Guy scenario, with hypocrisy thrown in to boot? 8/10, and well-earned.

TPBM Has memorized all the lines in a movie

Eh... I've read many, many poems extremely similar to this. Try to take the topic in a new direction, why couldn't he say it back? Did he even really love ...

you only think you have Imp. But I've said too much...

7.5/10 Mainly awesome, but it flashes a bit quickly on a couple of them

6.7/10 Nice, I suppose. But I see far too many that are similar

a would-be laid back dropout, who's just looking for a good time. Ever

I was indirectly quoting a modern interpretation, so I'm sure the wording's different. Regardless, it was God who severed the relationship and kicked them out, so I'm fairly certain you ...

"God did not lie, he just didn't give them much inforation, that's not lying. " Lying by omission. The Snake, on the other hand, told the full truth. They would ...

I love music, but not for writing. Maybe it's just 'cuz I don't write prose, but I hate listening to music while writing. It detracts from whatever emotion I'm trying ...