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whoa, random bump much? But really, Jack, this isn't your best. You didn't express anything new or vivid here; and I for one felt nothing. But I've seen better pieces ...

You get so limited by your rhyme scheme in this that the flow really suffers. My advice? Cut the rhyming altogether. You've got some beautiful phrases here--unbind that eloquence from ...

-points at Claw and Coll- They say neat stuff. But yeah; this was all surface fluff. There was no weight behind the words, if you know what I mean. On ...

quick-crit, forgive me if I repeat others. Ok, the rhyming here is overly simplistic and does nothing but detract. So nix the rhymes. Your lines aren't in any coherent tense ...

Zee-eeee. This thread is a couple years old. faith's now been here significantly longer then either you or me. xD

The hair's so interesting; I love it. And the jeans! I like how they're all uber-complex. How'd you ever work out where all the wrinkles go?!

Poor kitty's gonna freeze ;)

8.6/10 I've always had a weak spot for Paradise Lost

The first and third are pretty cool. But slightly creepy at the same time.

I'm stuck between paperback and Pat on this one... So far I've had a pretty solid Pat-based voting history, but paperbacks have been kind to me over the years. Unlike ...

Church of Hot Addiction anyone? xD

Zee>> Yes it is. Oh, and I believe 'omniscience' is the word you're looking for xD Firestalker>> Yes, well... I tend to be ambiguous and abstract in my poems, but ...

Awww, your first rejection letter. Our little Zee's growing up. *sentimental tear*

Boi-ii!!! Erm. Yes.

Ok, I posted this in the Contest section, but it got no response whatsoever. :p Soo, it's made its way over to the Art section, in hopes of a new ...