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yes, I'm a punk, and yes, you're SirFand. 6/10

I still owe you a crit of this! Don't let me forget :D

I think I can speak well on the subject because I actually took the time to read both Eragon and Eldest, and I approached them with an open mind. *throwsup ...

Yeah, I've no idea how to add you, even if I can. ^_^

I think you should take the idea behind this, and cerate a totally new piece. Your rhymes are hazy, inconsistent, and forced to the point beyond saving. The 'transitions' are ...

could be a dystopian setting, I suppose. But not at all in my tastes..

well, I'd add you as a friend on DA (actually...does DA have 'friends'? xD. As you can see, I never use it :p) But it's under maintenance.

well, the winner is ennui.. being the only person who entered, you may pm me with links to the pieces you'd like critiqued. And stirly- Yes, yes you do :D

"truckers" should be either "trucker's" or "truckers'", depending on what you meant. [//grammar-naziism] This sounds like something my friend Matt would write. Overall, simplistic. It wasn't emotional

well, my midnight is the latest in the US. 'Cept for Hawaii. GMT time is significantly earlier, but I'm lenient with deadlines :p

Wooow. Well, this closes tomorrow. So if anyone wants to enter, you'll probably get a bunch of free crits. -rolls eyes-

I haven't read through others' posts, so forgive me if I repeat. But are you serious?!?! You can't compare the two. JK is an excellent author, while Paolini uses rehashed ...

1) How much do you read? The whole thing? A few articles? The announcements? The whole thing, but in a fairly random order. 2) Do you try out any of ...

First off-- Listen to Scribe, he's right. All I'm gonna do is correct your mythology. Zeus was the lord of the Heavens, the Earth was considered mutual territory between him, ...

Idk. I reserved it at Border's, but I won't be able to pick it up there in time, as I'm going to reno tomorrow, so I'm going to try to ...