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7/10. No comment, really :p

Flemzo...if you're honestly writing a story just to use words you think are 'cool', don't bother posting it here. :p But please, do enjoy saying the words aloud and in ...

I think Ried and Claw covered this well, I just thought I'd mention that technically you're supposed to crit 2 pieces before posting one of your own. Naggingly Yours, ~Ed

Alright, I'll say it right now; I'm generally averse to archaic poems. And even beyond that though, this seemed forced. For instance, I'm certain you misused 'suffice' here: "Just one ...

I'm going camping, I'll be back in a few days. ~Ed

dear god..you actually went back to those, B? :roll: Remind me to remind you how awesome you are

you should watch the vid! I edited in a link :D And really, isn't it worth it to see cheerleaders with gasmasks?

Well, if you post your poetry, I'm sure we'll be seeing somethnig of each other :D

This are alternate lyrics to My Chemical Romance's song, 'Teenagers'. Yes, call it cheating if you like, but I'm no songwriter xD. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ As you pace through this song Try ...

JealousSerialKiller-to-be -- Neville Radishcal -- Luna mY h3aRt cRiEssS -- Cho (everyone knows she'd be emo xD) GravityZucks -- Krum

7/10. I've seen similar :p

Better suited for prose poetry, actually. As it is, it can't assert itself as a poem enough to justify leaving it as such. But as for the content, it reminds ...

I had to read HBP twice before it phased me at all. I imagine it's much the same with DH, as I really don't care for it as of yet. ...

[s]wat[/s]. What. W H at. That's just one word. It's "to" not "2" and 'cause or 'because' not "cuz". Show some semblance of professionalism. If you don't care about your ...

Where to start.... Emotional Poetry Punctuation . Well then... I'd try writing in a way that lets readers relate to the characters or situations; that way, they'll actually care what's ...