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I really don't expect crits on this, since I've neglected critting for so long. So why am I posting this? I don't know. Anyway, crits will be returned if you ...

to me, this was all about religion. A lot of the parts were good, but I would argue that each section isn't really able to stand on it's own--though the ...

Cal, you're basically amazing XD.

Thanks for all the feedback, everyone =] But it's kinda unclear of what you're trying to it something to do with life? It was intended as commentary on the weird ...

how much ham would a hamster stir if a hamster could stir ham? Intended for Brad, but it's open, really.

first in a long, long while. Raze the Roof Let’s sit and discuss the morality of walking through walls; of coursing through the veins of this place like syphilis. The ...

well, the letter was supposed to be sent by the narrator to a previously deceased person, with the "can't convey the way that dew drops dry" line showing how even ...

I actually meant "the glass", but I like grass considerably more, so I'm using it now :p Thanks for all the help! *edited*

this will be bent to fit whatever music is made for it, since there is none as of yet. ~~~ A Rightly Timed Pause (When Hearts Attack) The headlights press ...

rhyming kills this poem. It makes it feel contrived and forced--focus on emotion first. I'd recommend you try free verse until you find your 'voice'--then you can go back to ...

Name: Ezra Marlowe Age: 29 Race: Italian Father, Irish Mother. Gender: Male Height: 5'10" / 177.8 cm Weight: 148lbs / 67.1 kg Islander

ooh, I'll have to *attempt* to enter this. Which reminds me, I need to get new brushes...

your hair's cool, angelfire. Anyway, I actually happened upon a recentish picture of me. And what's more, I'm sort of smiling. As you can tell, the picture was taken from ...

here's sort of how I imagine the protagonist of the one short story that I've actually planned out XD

I failed miserably. I wrote little, and of what I did write, I've only found pieces that I actually like. Worse than last year, probably. However, I did learn that ...