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This is really good, Nutty. I liked the idea, the descriptions, and the voice. But again, what happened to her follower? Was the follower supposed to be the man she ...

I have gray/green eyes and I hate them. They look so dull. But everyone disagrees ahah. My family has all different eyes: Me (green gray) Brother 1 (Blue) Brother 2 ...

Dying to dream, we fall asleep, Rendering the whole city powerless. Everyone knows the rules, the laws And the fact that dreaming is illegal. Most people call it bull shit, ...

This is really good, I like it. I recently went caving and you described everything perfectly. I also really like the part about the "Illuminating the calcium streaked walls and ...

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Hi, i dont really get it, but i like it. You sre very creative, and this is quite different to any other poetry I've read. Good choice to put it ...

This is really cool, but short, so im going to push to reach 250 characters. I dont like the fact you started off rhyming and then started at the end. ...

Crazy is just a word, a judgemental one at that. Random people who don't even know who you Are, judge you over how you act, what you like. So over ...

I think these are awesom. The little things that Elinor pointed out as distracting, but to me they are the imperfections of nature, the beauty of being different and imperfect ...

I just got my glasses back for reading and things where i am really close to what im doing. (Art, computer, DS) But I dont wear them all the time.

I really like this, Im sure everyone above has covered the nit-picks. I think this is fine on the writing style and yeah it seems a bit cliche that she ...

*littles tears* AAAWWW! Hi forest. This is sooooo cuuutteeee! Okay. Here are my nit-picks. fattening vending macheienes Machines* "I really, really do look you...and everything I said to you was, ...

This is really good. I like the theme, the fact you wrote about the word you used as the acrostic. I don't get the bubbling and gurgling part, however. Maybe ...

Welcome to YWS! We really thank you a lot for joining :) Just because a novel is unoriginal, doesn't mean it can't kick the butt's of the other novels from ...

Im obsessed with the book 'Letters to my mother' By Teresa Cardenas. :)