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Sorry to be lame, but this sounds too 'grown up' to be a fantasy fiction. Unless your target audience are adults; then i'm totally wrong. but try to hmm... 'dmb ...

Hey Pen, olli here. great story, and thankies to fruit basket for the grammer corrections!!! very interresting, but againa book being a portal is quite cliche. sorry ifit's too harsh ...

Amazing story and i believe it hasbeen set up for a greatplot. cntinue and pm the rest to me plaese???? you don't have to, any way. STILL it's perfect. great ...

The Prologue Kayla’s Story Beginning The moon was full. No clouds were in the sky. The girl scuffed her feet along asphalt of the school court yard. She wondered when ...

The brittle stones in the creek were moving ever so softly. The moss above the surface was turning brown as the water started to fall slow. A beaver padded over ...

The brittle stones in the cree were moving ever so softly. The moss above the surfacewas turning brown as the water sarted to fall slow. A beaver padded over to ...