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  • Lounge, The Re: Want an avatar? (2)

    Hi again sorry. Or... (pictures) pics of Runes from Cassandra Clare's Mortal Instruments series... (words) Biffle thanks

    Feb 13, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Designing Covers for fun! :)

    (name) Olli Paroli (title) Unkindly Waters. (cover art) A girl holding a pale Blue seashell in one hand (only show half of the girl's body. Her eyes are Orange) the ...

    Feb 13, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Want an avatar? (2)

    Hey typo twin. Picture: Glee cast pulling 'loser' sign. Words: GLOSER!! Effects: None Thanks Durrie, you are amazing, so i thought i'd get one from you :D -Olli

    Feb 13, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: "Sepia" Rewrite

    Beautiful. This is the first Sci-Fi I have ever read... So you've set the bar pretty high. This is graceful and poem like. I need some more thought in the ...

    Feb 13, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Love the sinner

    Wow, This is one creepy story. All though it's creepy, it is still fanTASTIC. It was compelling yet dark. Stephen has a funny last name, is that on purpose? I ...

    Feb 13, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Somewhere Lost -Prologue (edited)

    This, I'm afraid, was a hard read. I'm not trying to be cruel, but you NEED to remember to space. And I didn't really get the point of this. Prologues ...

    Feb 13, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Whispers

    I really liked this. It capturedher emotions perfectly. First it was sadness then astonishment when he came back. I think this could go far. hat could be a prolgue, then ...

    Feb 13, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: where does everyone get there influences?

    Most of my inspiration comes from a widerange of places.... Like family, friends, random events in my life and the such :D

    Feb 13, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: My Sister's Keeper

    I haven't read it yet or seen it. Can some one tell me what it's about?

    Feb 13, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Survivor, Kelly Farr's story.

    This story isdedicated to those who have been through leukemia or a relative. Kelly Farr lay in her bed, pale and feeling sick. Her chemo-therapy made her feel horrible. She ...

    Feb 12, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: the river that weeps(chpt one pt 1)

    Hey guys, thanks for the good points you made. I promise part two will be longer. As i said i ran out of time/patients/overall enthusiasm. See ya later PEACE -OLLI

    Jan 31, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: the river that weeps(chpt one pt 1)

    (I still don't have time, will finish soon) Kye sat down in front of the blazing pink fire. She had just learned to make it and was testing the warmth. ...

    Jan 31, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: bigger meanings - prologue

    Caught my atention pretty well. But the whole lanky, talentless orphan girl seems really cliche to me. True having an orphan character gives them interesting backstories, but it's been done ...

    Jan 31, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: The White Room (Warning: Graphic Imagery)

    EPIC -OLLI/ twelvey

    Jan 31, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Heaven and Hell (not fixed title)

    Really mysterious. I didn't like the flow, however. Too many unnecessary commas like in the bit whereit says "Outside the rooms in the corridor, was a girl, stood motionless, staring ...

    Jan 31, 2010


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