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  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2

    Green

    Mar 25, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Once again- Chapter one.

    Also Mylifemypain, Kayla is from NewZealand, like me. We spell Mom as Mum. lol

    Mar 25, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Once again- Chapter one.

    Hi, Biffle here to review. I really like this story (and thanks for putting me in there xD) But there are some litlle bits where it swaps tense. As a ...

    Mar 25, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Once again Prologue

    Hey Smexay. Mary (Seth’s mum) Use commas, it flows better. I lifted my knees to my chest and propped my chin of them and I did the one thing I ...

    Mar 25, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Infected- Chapter 1.

    This seems so much like I Am Ledgend... and as i said before, you need to add more. Just because I know you personally, I'm gonna say this: HURRY UP ...

    Mar 21, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Notice

    This is annoying. Im sorry, but all the sounds and stuff just bug me. I know your character is noticing things, but... Yeah, it just doesnt work for me. I ...

    Mar 20, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Sunset.

    The sky is alight. Blazing. The blue of it is almost gone; replaced with pink and orange. My eyes reflect the colour, every shining detail of them. "Irey, get down ...

    Mar 19, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: My Immortal (chapter 3)

    My eyes burst open, the light searing them. Sarah is next to me on the opaque hospital seats. There is a couple more people with her. One is tan with ...

    Mar 17, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: My Immortal (Chapter 2)

    "Mum? Mum!" I panic, "Mum are you okay?" What is going on? This was not normal. I dial 111. The air in the room smells stale, metallic even. "Hello, you ...

    Mar 15, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: You are a wave...

    That's really awesome man. Thank you for posting here!! No one ever posts on my activities or competitions... xD

    Mar 15, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Biffle1

    ????? whaaaa?

    Mar 15, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: My Immortal Chapter 1

    No realisation has an 's' ok? Different countries. My country uses 's' way more than 'z'. lol

    Mar 15, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]

    Hey, only near blue i own xD and there is a girl behind me... I do NOT have a mullet hehe. My school has teams... TEAM BLUE FTW!!!! xD

    Mar 14, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]

    Me at atheletics day xD

    Mar 14, 2010
  • Randomosity Archive Re: insert coin

    you get absolutely.... positively.... lots of sickness in your future xD *inserts coin*

    Mar 14, 2010


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