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So me and my friend wrote a scene from 'The Uninvited' to be judged by our other friend. I Hope you enjoy. (EDIT: here is a rough idea of what ...

Sorry shubhi, really, Skins got everything I found so I would be useless to just say it all again. Really good report, Im sure the magazine editor will be happy. ...

I lay here. Nothing enters my mind. My eyes don't pick up anything but black. I'm dead, not really but that's what it feels like. This is what Mom and ...

Seeing you, makes me a starry eyed Tool. Inject your dazzle, your haze. All who see you are starry eyed. Rendering us to do your every bidding. Reaping our souls ...

I see the blood on my shirt. Can it be possible that you put it there? Am I dreaming? Nothing seems real. Something in your eyes, it's off; not you. ...

Holy crap that was weird! I love it :) Nobodies come through. That should be 'Nobody's come through' Very, very good. Keep on writing my down the road buddy ;) ...

KFC may be in NZ but we dont have some thing that bad. Its just showing how processed most American foods are.

Falling into a dark abyss, Ugly thoughts run through your mind. Light left you a millenia ago, Lost its purpose entirely. You know what's coming next, of course. Anything could ...

Thanks for the reviews. Okay, I seem to be reallt bad at putting a point accross. The word 'joints' (originally, 'joint') is marijuana. Not a burger joint. And it IS ...

Its an acrostic poem, the so is in the correct position :)

This is really mysterious. The one thing I don't like about it is the fact that you woke up three times. Like, if this was longer I'd not notice as ...

Hey there. The part to me that really sounds odd is: Deep underground the ground, Maybe it could be "Underneath the ground," or, "Under the ground" Also the lines are ...

Aww, i was going to ask but you dont do poetry :(

If it is alright, I would love to see the original :) Good job, however, its not blurry at all (to me). *likes*