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~Cameron~ (BTW i dont know what tense you want this in but imma do mine in past tense. If you want me to change it , i will :)) (P.s, ...

There are a couple more errors for this :) rocking back and fourths Should be rocking back and forth. Oh no!shit! Spaces and capitals. Good read, thanks. Biffle

Yeah I might just start typing incase we start soon :)

Hi guys, thanks for the short reviews for my short piece! 1. I was trying to imply that the son, Kyle, gets his dad then the daughter, my MC, gets ...

Before you insert your coin, tell the person infront of you what they got. (Remeber this is for everyone, try keep it PG) I'll kick it off. *inserts coin*

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Hey there. The only thing about this that bugs me is the size of each line. They grow really large, then become les than five words. But I love this ...

As for em rushing the end, thats on purpose so it doesnt get too description-y. Will do on the editing front :) And Shubhi, is this age appropriate or should ...

I really like this, but there isn't much to review, as this piece contains mainly speech. So ill just do one of my signature 'unhelpful' reviews where i tell you ...

Can I have the older Jenkin son? (If i may, here is my description of him) Name: Cameron Jenkins. Age: 16 or 17 (you decide) He is a fair haired ...

you might as well delete this.... since I edited the whole thing! Excuse me? delete my first ever 3000 characterreview? Na ah sister. Dont tell me to delete a review, ...

I'll tell you, a baby takes at least nine months to develop, thus making it impossible unless they are in fact step brothers. You need to work on your common ...

you get a baby puppy and a punch in the face from a mexican man when you go to sleep :) *inserts coin*

This is so cuute. I love it, but on her chest the bones are a bit awkward... Maybe re do them? I dunno, since I am a crap drawer... anyway, ...

Yeah, i went up north and saw my step dads parents and some random hick people (no offence) but yeah, pretty cool. :)