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Kay, so this is new, and I didn't really even spend 15 minutes on it, so it could use a lot of work :? . You are who you pretend ...

So, I read a lot of poetry, so I understood what this meant, but it is very confusing. It's good, and has potential, but it's just the outline of a ...

I really liked this poem, and think it's great as it is :). The only critiques I have are: The silver moon shone his light to an endless infinite ride ...

I really liked this story, it was sad, happy, and cute all in one. It was informative, and to the point, and put a great deal of information into a ...

That was absolutely beautiful, and translated so well I was absolutely amazed. You definitely have an amazing English-Spanish ability here and I'm curious what you could do if you combined ...

Kay so I literally just wrote this, reread it and went "ew." So help me make it better! This one needs some serious work :\. The sad part about the ...

I love this. I love the fact that the mean theme, the main point of the poem isn't revealed until the very last line (or the second to last if ...

I liked the general impression of the poem, it has a lot of potential, even though it is very sad and pessimistic. This is my advice: Telephone wires slice the ...

I liked the twist at the end of how you put the lines together in an order that changed the meaning completely. However, you could work a bit on the ...

Okay, so I loved this poem :). I really did, if flowed (mostly) really well, and everything seemed to fit together....However, here are my suggestions: Every hour, Seems like a ...

Alrightyyyy so I did realllyyyy like this poem, and I LOVED the story behind it, but I have to admit it tripped me up trying to read it. It felt ...

Okay so I kinda wrote this in a rush, when I was pretty angry. So I'm sorry if it's off, I haven't revised it at all (I probably need quite ...

I really liked this poem, and it seems like you did a very good job. You seem to be very loyal to your country and that is something to pride ...

I really liked this :). I'm not really into this style of poetry, so the fact that I liked it is really something! I especially liked the start: Eyes tempting, ...

Soooo you have a lot of potential as a writer :). This is not a bad piece of work you've got here, but I would suggest you play around with ...