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So, I've never tried anything like this before, and honestly I didn't even spend 20 minutes trying to throw this together (I haven't the attention span). I've never even attempted ...

This poem was really good, and I don't see much wrong with the punctuation either, which is one of the things I'm normally all over poets about. I'm not sure ...

Honestly, I don't understand this poem. I know there is a lot going on in your head here, and it may make perfect sense to you, but it's almost like ...

Okay so uhhhhmmm....Where to start. First off, while this piece isn't bad, it's a topic that is WAY over abused it's practically a cliche, and not a good one. Second, ...

This is gorgeous :). You did a great job, and it rings true with amazing patriotism. The punctuation however, is terrible. But that's what I'm here to try and fix ...

I loved this poem, and it's a WHOLE lot better than most of my stuff every turns out when I try to write it wide awake, let alone half asleep ...

Okie dokie, this poem was full of raw emotion, and excellent descriptions. I loved it :). The only thing that threw me off was the constant changing rhyme scheme, that ...

Alright, so honestly, I didn't understand this poem at all. It felt kind of choppy to me, which forced my attention away from the meaning of the poem. So I'm ...

I really liked this poem :). It was long, and I normally get bored with long poems, but this one was able to keep my attention. The rhythm was actually ...

Kay so I really liked this, and being really into rap and hip-hop myself, I was able to perfectly form this in my head as a song, which is really ...

This is a really good poem :). The only problem I see is the punctuation. When there is no punctuation, people can do one of two things: They can read ...

Not entirely sure what this is. Did you post this up here by accident, meaning to be commenting on something else? That "reply" button isn't hard to mix up with ...

GAH Okay, so this is good.....But it's a bit all over the place and there is NO punctuation......Rookie mistake. Here's how I'd fix it: The beauty of the world Put ...

So I like the start, but I'm having trouble relating. Maybe the poem just isn't for me, and that's why I'm having trouble relating, but these are my suggestions: I ...

I really liked this poem, and for something with an uncommon meter and no rhyme scheme like this, that doesn't get typed into my keyboard often :). I really liked ...