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Alright, the general gist of this was very good, but here are some things I'd like to point out: There is no cure to force. This just grammatically does not ...

This is really good, and I really like the meaning behind it. It has a deep visual and emotional meaning, that you've done a very good job on. The only ...

I liked this :). I was able to see it in my head very well, though I am having trouble grasping the emotion of it. I can tell that there ...

I really like them :). I like the last one the most, because the shadowing is pppppppeeeeeerrrrrrffeeeccctttttttt!!! :). I like the stump the second most, but it would be my ...

This is very good, and strangely very cute as well, but I do have some issues with the format: Living in a society where you disagree with most of its ...

I'm not entirely sure what this was supposed to be. If this is supposed to be multiple poems (I don't think it is though) I would suggest putting it in ...

This is SO cute and I love it! :) Just wanted to fix a few things: I haven't always smiled when I see people kissing , But now when I ...

Alright, so this is really good, and I like the theme. I definitely know what you mean. I just wanted to point out a few things: For anxious as a ...

This poem isn't bad, it has a good meter and rhyme scheme, but a few things did trip me up. First off, I don't like the constant repetition of that ...

I really liked this poem, though I feel as though the theme was very generic. I kinda had just a generic "themed" picture in my head. My remedy for this ...

Alright, so this isn't BAD per-say, it has a form of a meter, and it flows well enough, but it isn't coherent. Something should be concise, coherent, and complete. Yours ...

Ohhh.....well then....That's, interesting? I understood the poem (I think?) and (While a bit worried for your sanity, lol jks) it was a very good piece if you look at it ...

SO cute so cute so cute so cute so cute :). I love this. Have I mentioned I think it's cute? Just making sure....lol anyways, You did great job on ...

Okie dokie, so first off, your punctuation was not exactly perfect. The poem was very good, but I would have a better first impression if the first letter of every ...

This was a very cute and dramatic short piece, it was emotional and visual. Your imagery is perfect, and your simile is exact. The only problems I see are the ...