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  • Official Polls Re: How Often Do You Critique?

    WTF? ????That's like that deoderant spray, right?????

    Jun 5, 2007
  • Official Polls Re: In General, Most People Are...

    well imbiciles but that wwasnt an option. :D

    Jun 5, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: My Poetry

    ok that last one is sort of stupid and made no sense but the first one is a good idea just make it like 5 times longer and you'll be ...

    Jun 5, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Two poems

    i like the last one but the first one kind of.....rhymes to much

    Jun 5, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I died on Salem Bridge

    i really like the first two lines and i think this is really good....but it stops a bit suddenly

    Jun 5, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Aesthetic You and Me.

    this is good....but you lost me at the 4th line

    Jun 5, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Death of a Poet

    i really like this...but it doesnt make much sense

    Jun 5, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: death like destiny

    with words so perfect, like the devils tongue. but lies are all you get. they may tempting. they may be sweet. but when you get there, you'll find no treat. ...

    Jun 5, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Daddy Say's He Loves You

    i really like this....and it makes alot of sense........

    Jun 4, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Your Umbrella

    i like it but it doesnt explain much.

    May 27, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Writing

    i like it.

    May 27, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Coincidence

    this is really god but it kind of throws me off at the end and stops suddenly

    May 27, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Against my will

    i like it but its a bit confusing almost like it starts in the middle of the poem

    May 12, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Ultimate Battle

    i like it but the seond to last line is a bit strange

    May 12, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Quiet Obsession

    i like it it realy fits together but the first part kind of cuts off to suddenly

    May 12, 2007


All truly wise thoughts have been thought already thousands of times; but to make them truly ours, we must think them over again honestly, till they take root in our personal experience.
— Johann Wolfgang von Goethe