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Re: How Often Do You Critique?
WTF? ????That's like that deoderant spray, right?????
Jun 5, 2007 -
Re: In General, Most People Are...
well imbiciles but that wwasnt an option. :D
Jun 5, 2007 -
Re: My Poetry
ok that last one is sort of stupid and made no sense but the first one is a good idea just make it like 5 times longer and you'll be ...
Jun 5, 2007 -
Re: Two poems
i like the last one but the first one kind of.....rhymes to much
Jun 5, 2007 -
Re: I died on Salem Bridge
i really like the first two lines and i think this is really good....but it stops a bit suddenly
Jun 5, 2007 -
Re: Aesthetic You and Me.
this is good....but you lost me at the 4th line
Jun 5, 2007 -
Re: The Death of a Poet
i really like this...but it doesnt make much sense
Jun 5, 2007 -
Re: death like destiny
with words so perfect, like the devils tongue. but lies are all you get. they may tempting. they may be sweet. but when you get there, you'll find no treat. ...
Jun 5, 2007 -
Re: Daddy Say's He Loves You
i really like this....and it makes alot of sense........
Jun 4, 2007 -
Re: Your Umbrella
i like it but it doesnt explain much.
May 27, 2007 -
Re: Writing
i like it.
May 27, 2007 -
Re: Coincidence
this is really god but it kind of throws me off at the end and stops suddenly
May 27, 2007 -
Re: Against my will
i like it but its a bit confusing almost like it starts in the middle of the poem
May 12, 2007 -
Re: The Ultimate Battle
i like it but the seond to last line is a bit strange
May 12, 2007 -
Re: Quiet Obsession
i like it it realy fits together but the first part kind of cuts off to suddenly
May 12, 2007
