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I had a hard time understanding this poem, it may have been your intent, but this poem is extremely choppy. I don't understand much about this poem except that it's ...

I love this poem, but I do have a few minor suggestions to make the poem flow a little better: Cold eyes knew that they wouldn’t dare, true, but the ...

I like the gist of the poem, it basically seems to me like a story of a person who is hiding feelings. But one thing that doesn't quite fit is ...

Trapped in my world which I despise, Wide awake with wide open eyes. As I wonder under the stars HEY CUTIE!! :P This is what I'd do: Trapped in my ...

Okay, I really like this poem but the only problem with it is rhythm and rhyming. It seems like every other stanza you attempted at a rhyme, and kinda failed ...

Lol of course, you know I already love this poem! My only suggestion would be to flip the last two words to make it "routine unseen" instead. Love ya jake!

I thought this was very good and well put together (though a little long, that's not a bad thing) What I don't like is the fact that i really, even ...

I love this poem and I agree with you completely and totally. I think you did a great job in writing this and there's nothing that I can see that ...

Alright, over all this is a great poem, but your spelling is (no offense) horrible. I see most people have already corrected you here so I'm not going to go ...

pocket! soda can goes inside house.....phone goes inside pocket...

I would love to read more! after I got over the fact that they were all animals it was a very nice story.....make sure to message me if you put ...

i thought it was very good.....the sister on sister thing was kind of disturbing and the thought of a god cumming was even more disturbing...

okay first, I'm not good at grammar so bear with me, second, this is my first attempt so again, bear with me.....i have more of it written but i don't ...

i've posted this before but i didnt get a reliable answer I called and then again i tried until the moon grew full i cried couldnt move couldnt speak fell ...

okay this is just my opinion and these arent my favorite kinds of poems so if i'm wrong i'm sorry As he huffed far away, From his bill, (what bill?) ...