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This was really cute and I loved the sing song nature of it :) There was only one line that bugged me: A new morning's whisper stirs the broken, they've ...

This is amazing and very descriptive. I really liked it, and I don't like many non-lyric poetic styles, but this one if very good. Just a few comments, not many ...

I liked this piece a lot :). The meter was good and it was a cute, yet deep piece of writing that you obviously worked very hard to put together ...

"Cata" is a prefix that technically means "down." However, it is often used in biology and scientific terms to mean "opposite." For example: catabolism is a metabolic process opposite to ...

Cataternity- The opposite of "eternity." The belief that something never was, and never will be. Ex: The state of cataternity of the imaginary aliens would continue on forever. Synonyms: Never, ...

Alright, so you have a good poem here, but your meter and rhyme is totally out of whack. Let me give you some advice on how to fix that: In ...

This was really cute and I really liked it. I really wish you'd add more to it honestly, as I feel like there's just so much missing here. It doesn't ...

These are all really cute and I think the reflection of the sun really adds to the vintage look of the photos. I didn't really like the last two as ...

So honestly, this is the biggest piece of crap I've tried to write in a long time, and I think it's because I am so depressed. I never write well ...

This flows really well, and the imagery is interesting XD. The only thing I could suggest is that you try to make the first two stanzas flow better with the ...

Soooooo my name is Christina!!! Anyways, here's my advice :) I woke up with a weird taste in my mouth. You know, the sore throat feeling ;[ /b] the dryness. ...

I really liked the meaning behind this poem, but I do have one major thing that kept bugging me. The rhythm. You started off sing-song, and then almost went into ...

Erm....well, this is very.....Twisted. It's well written, and scary, I'll give you that, but it honestly just made me want to throw up. I'm not sure what was going on ...

LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE! Just like I love all of your work! :). You worked so hard on this and yours turned out so much better than mine! Lol, good luck in the ...

I didn't think I was going to enter anything for the competition, but then I just had to! Hope you like it! We’ve been around for seven years, Growing larger ...