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Wow, I fully understand this poem. It is total tragedy when people's minds start going. After my great-grandma''s second stroke she started thinking that her husband was really her highschool ...

It's absolutely amazing how much attention this thread has gotten. Tell someone not to do something that they can't get in trouble for doing and they immediately do it. Wow.

When I started this I wasn't sure where I was going with it, I just suddenly felt the need to write. I was already at my computer so I just ...

Confusing, I honestly didn't understand. Maybe I wasn't supposed to, but what I suggest is getting rid of some of the fancy stuff that went along with it, people get ...

I do like it, though I have to say I had to read it through a LOT before I could fully understand it. I tend to read things out loud ...

First off, I like the poem. It's well written and consistent, but I do have a few minor things to point out: If you could hear what I was thinking, ...

Make me out of plastine, So you can mould me how you like. Make me out of something real, Like a flame or just some sunlight. Though I like the ...

This is a first draft of a poem that I wrote in the last 15 minutes or so of chemistry a few days ago while we were taking notes, so ...

I think this is a great idea and a good poem, but it could be better. Rushing as fast as I can.. . But will I be on time? Will ...

I like the poem a lot, the first stanza is amazing and makes a lot of sense. The second stanza seems like a dumbed down repeat of the first. When ...

I love this poem a lot, it's really deep and has a ton of weight in it's meaning. Great job. The dark shields our eyes It battles the truth and ...

Very confusing first draft, I KNOW it's confusing, but if you can follow it you'll know what it means. I wish it was as simple as 1,2,3 I wish it was as easy as A, B, C I wish I cou

I have to admit, this is great and funny and all that, but is it a poem? I can't seem to find a rhythm or a beat of any kind. ...

A prose is still supposed to have some form of rhythm. This really doesn't. It' a paragraph.

This poem was actually inspired by my father, who I moved in with about a year ago after my mom destroyed me. He made me so many promises, the biggest ...