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Re: Welcome to Apollo! Nothing works...
Portfolios will be back! Once Nate is able to get back to finishing the site (he's a busy guy, you know!) portfolios are going to be one of the many ...
May 3, 2012 -
Re: Welcome to Apollo! Nothing works...
Will portfolios be back any time soon? Or are they lost forever? Or am I just stupid and can't find it.....I miss it! Thanks!
May 3, 2012 -
Re: Those things I cannot say.
So, here's yet another 5 minute poem. It could use a lot of help, so please comment with your suggestions! I asked you not to say those words. They do ...
Jan 22, 2012 -
Re: Necessary Evil
I didn't really spend much time on this. Maybe 10-15 minutes, so i hope it's good. This poem was inspired by the quote "Was may sometimes be a necessary evil, ...
Jan 7, 2012 -
Re: Chapter 1: Christina
Chapter 2: I opened my eyes, it was really early in the morning, and I was being carried down the street very quickly. We got on the street where the ...
Jan 6, 2012 -
Re: Chapter 1: Christina
I'm so glad I could help! It's a great start, and the confusion with the tenses is completely gone! I'd be interested to read some more :). Let me know ...
Dec 30, 2011 -
Re: Hate for Peace
Wrote this in eight minutes, so it needs some work with the meter. Help me out guys? Speak for me when I am gone, Tell my story dusk till dawn. ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Thanks.. For nothing.
Very very cute :). I liked it a lot and you did a good job with the emotional input. You used to tell me I was This just doesn't quite ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: Broken Heart
This was very good :). I liked it very much, but I REALLY think you need to add a name to it. You aren't going to get much attention to ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: In Her Eyes
This is very cute, and I like it. My biggest problem with it being that it seems to change into a different.....I don't know, but I feel as though it ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Celestially Shattered
Cute :). Very cute, and very well written. I like this a lot and I'm not entirely sure what else you could do to fix it except elaborate, which you've ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: "Happy" Halloween
This was kinda cutish, but I feel as though you could write more. You say it's about a hunt done by mythical creatures, but I really wish you would try ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: He Must Have Called Me Moe
So, this isn't bad and I like the ideas behind it, my biggest problems lay in your format and the fact that you tumble off topic in ways that might ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: The Afterparty
This was really good. Confusing at times, but actually well thought out despite the sort of "rushed" feeling that I got. But the "rushed" atmospheric tone actually fits in pretty ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Green Flowers
Loveddd itttt :). But of course, I love everything you write :). I think it was perfect and adorable, and very patriotic surprisingly....lol :). Great job! You're such a good ...
Nov 23, 2011
