werewolfgirl

It's cool, Is that really a novel your working on, if not, you should

wow, this is really good, I'm not a poet and don't claim to be but I think even people like me can totally understand the message, it is straight forward ...

thank you all, I did re-edit it And so I will replace it with that and It has paragraphs!! yay!!

I do like it but I think more people would read it if you had some stronger voice and opinions in it, maybe even some mild humor, thats just me ...

Dang it! I thought, profanities running through my head to quickly for me to make sense of them. Why does this always happen to me!? I opened the front door ...

Hello all. Yes another newbie and this is a very large forum. Hi again