werewolfgirl

I really like this song! what genre was it intended for? 'kay so, when I read it I was probably mentally singing it (and singing it outloud :smt003 ) differently ...

I like it, there is definitely emotion, and I can really imagine music, it isn't one of those songs with an indistinct mood, Good Job!

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Its interesting the audience is sort of confused in the beginnig and to a point that is a good thing, also more voice from the characther give more of the ...

okay, the edits were minimal and just basic grammar and flow mistakes.

I love the message and the emotion in the poem, I'm not a poem expert but I think maybe the flow in the middle is a little off. But I ...

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I do like it, it has a really cool, urgent, dark feel about it there were some things that didn't make sense to me. read it over and pretend you ...

so, I have given several reviews but haven't gotten any points for them!!

It wasn't bad not at all, there was voice, I did get a little confused and there was a verse or two that was a little too mushy for my ...

awesome, it was strong and you really connected with your audience, well done

I like it alot, at least the feeling, but I think the metaphor is a little heavy. A little less of the metaphor but other wise I really like it.

I have to ideas and have 1 on paper started and one requires more research wich i have been reluctant to do.

I really liked it especially the verse after the key change

awesome totally relate to it, I love the feel of it all, the only thing is that one of the verses was a little of rhythm/rhyme it didn't quite match ...