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I thought this poem was adorable! I really liked it, i think it had just enough power and sugary sweetness. As far as suggestions I think happy-go-lucky touched on everything ...

Hi, I really, really like your poem. This is totally not a critique and its really lame of me but I don't have much time. Okay, right now I can't ...

Thanks guys! I realized when I found this poem again that I was going to need other peoples opinions to complete it. It just never seemed to be finished no ...

you captured All then it faded, twisted. shades of blue, old borrowed and new. it's been forgotten, found and shifted around in the boxes under the bed, moments in convenient ...

I can totally relate to this poem, Haha. These kind of teenager angst/growing up poems are kind of over done and to be honest when I first saw the title ...

Thanks guys! :) I can tell by the rules I'm gonna like it here. Although my reviews get a little crazy and to be honest I feel like a retard ...

Hi? I like this, a bunch. The first time I read it, to be honest, I just didn't expect what I was getting. It kind of surprised me. So anyway ...

...Of course that's terribly obvious because I made this topic. Anyway, I decided to follow Nate's advice {THANKS NATE!} so here I am. I feel like I should put more ...