wawamelon

I like this idea you have, you have a very good writing style. Are you going to do more? Because I actually like it ending right here, its kind of ...

I actually like how some of the sentance lengths are similer. It gives it a distinct rythem and since it is so short, probobly won't bore a reader. Good work!

I love how satiric this writing is, and i also enjoy how you listed all the different places he would go. It is fun to read because it is so ...

Simply said, no amount of joy in the world can make this day any better. It won’t make me feel any better. By no means would someone else’s uncontrollable out ...