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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Poem--"Untitled" (In grudging memory of D)

    I really liked this poem! It's so relateable and powerful. The only thing I can think that would have fixed it was if you posted it before she/he left. but ...

    Dec 10, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: An Empty Love

    It's very strange how I feel nothing for you anymore how I can touch you, taste you but not love you like before Even though I keep pushing you away, ...

    Nov 22, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: You

    It was good. But you need to dig deeper into your emotions, it definitley needs more emotion. However, it is not a lost cause. Its very short, sweet, and simple. ...

    Nov 22, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Feelings Ruin Everything

    A quiet attraction so platonic not so innocent uneasiness engulfs me the knowledge of no mutual feelings moving on seems to be one of the hardest things no more than ...

    Nov 20, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Just Another Fake

    I like this poem alot. It's very well written. great job!

    Nov 20, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: For Katy: The Retaliation of a "Best Friend"

    It's amazing how you can make me crumble without saying a word Your love consists of hate and I can't stand that But I love your hate and your poison ...

    Nov 19, 2005
  • Other Poetry Re: letting you go

    I feel the presence of you the joy, the laughter, those things that you once new I feel the presure of you the worry that I went through You sit ...

    Dec 16, 2004
  • Writing Activities Re: WASP

    Dear Brainless, Do not fret, for I too have been through this same predicament. It is not as strange as you think, for many people have been victims or have ...

    Dec 5, 2004
  • Writing Activities Re: Circle Story

    He was HUGE!!!! Like a bulking.....well he was just a bulking rhino;all big horn and no talk.

    Dec 5, 2004
  • Other Poetry Re: Faded Love

    I've fallen to the ground and I fell hard when I fell off our wall of passion I ended up scarred I tried to tear down that wall but the ...

    Dec 5, 2004
  • Other Poetry Re: Scented

    im kind of confused. sounds like some one angry because they were cheated by a lover. but i dont know. besides that its good.

    Dec 5, 2004
  • Welcome Mat Re: hey guys!!!!

    hey guys! just joined today this site is really cool. im gona post some of my writes and i encourage you all to read them and tell me what you ...

    Dec 5, 2004
  • Lounge, The Re: Instruments

    i just started playing guitar and im getting good. i love to play metallica and blink 182. when i get good enough im going to get an electric guitar. guitar ...

    Dec 5, 2004


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