watergirlwriter3

I remember walking through the steamy night mid July after it had rained for hours upon hours upon hours hoping to catch a glimpse of your bright red truck to ...

Maybe life wasn't meant to be appreciated by the living only by the dead because those whose hearts are still beating never think with their heads I wish I could ...

I have three dad's so this really struck me because for one- My father was in the room when I was born. For two it's difficult as a child to ...

I liked it. I wrote something similar but it didn't go over so well. Great job. I liked the thoughtfulness of it and the rhythme.

I think I know what's going on. You like a girl but someone else likes her and she broke both of your hearts and you're trying to get over her. ...

I liked this one. I guess because I know what you feel. I have a crush on 2 grocery store clerks and one Starbucks clerk. They're gorgous. But I felt ...

hahahahaha! I really liked this! It kind of reminds me of me. Is that sad? Hmmmmm. It's really funny and creative. I can kind of hear Weezer singing it.

okay,so it's not WOW material, but I like. However I am the one who wrote it.hum

I really, really liked this. I think it flowed really well. It seems like something that someone would read in a jam poetry session. It's great, good job.

I have seven classes dramatic friends and too many prior commitments to count I am a 16 year old who acts like I don't give a shit but I don't ...

My other news resolution was to stop cursing, I have a really dirty mouth, but losing weight sounds good to. I think I'll do the impossible......multi-task! ****gasp****

I liked this. I can feel your emotion, but it needs better rhythme. Besides that it was good.

I really like this poem. The structure is great. Your writing continues to make me go "damn, that's good".

"You're making a mistake" I said. " I think you should wait" I said. But you didn't listen I know what this thing can bring disaster But you refused to ...

this was very good. mmmmm...nice and gripping, just like I like it. I've never read your stuff, but I wouldn't mind reading it again. It really would do good a ...