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Hi Captain, I really like this short story. I have read the books and I think you have brought an interesting new perspective to how Katniss' father died. You really ...

Hi Kat Jackson, I quite liked your poem! It is good but it could be a bit better. Maybe you could expand on it a bit more. That will make ...

Hi, Snoink, OMG HAHAHAHAHA!!! This is the cutest little poem I have ever read!!!! I absolutely fell in love with it! The concept/ idea is so fantastic, telling the poem ...

Hi Abigail_W, I didn't mind your poem and surprisingly I understood it. It is very short though and as a result of this it lacks a few things like depth, ...

Hi kingolions, I thought this great! Its very deep and powerful which makes a good poem. "You asked me why I was closed inside, but it was because I'd opened ...

Hey Kingolions, I really enjoyed this poem. I agree with redleaf, the concept and content is great! The only thing you might need to work on is the sequence so ...

Hi Snoink, I really love this poem. Although I don’t think it is your best work I still like it. It is very catchy, in fact in reminds me of ...

Hi BlackDahlia, normally I hate poems on love of 3 reasons 1) They are dramatically over emotional 2) They are way too long and get boring 3) They lack purpose ...

Hi CaptianRandom, I really liked your pictures!! Hahaha, your lucky to have so many great flowers in your garden. My garden has mainly grass and trees all featuring weeds. Your ...

Hi Snoink, I love your pictures. Before I go on I would like to ask 'what prompted your love of pigs?' Personally I think pigs are very cute, they are ...

Hey Apple, I really love your drawing!! To me it looks a looks like a sketch because the lines are quite undefined but that is ok. Maybe you could add ...

Thank-you for reviewing my story....

Thanx all. First Story don't be too mean. I'm sure I will get better :)

Hi Flower Child, I really loved this poem. It is fantastic, creative and dark all at the same time. I love the idea of the clock. It is very imaginative! ...

Hi Redleaf, I loved our review/ summary. It is gripping and makes people curious about the book while not giving too much away! I myself have read the 'The Alchemyst' ...