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Sorry I wrote this at like 4 in the morning and i just realized how stupid it sounds and how much it doesnt make since. Im gonna try rewriting it ...

Standing next to her. Feeling her cool breath wash over my face. Now I knew where I belonged. I struggled in effort, but finally managed to grasp her hand. We ...

ur "nit-picking" is helping me understand what i could fix. I probably shouldve put in the story, tho, that they werent real assassins they were a poser gang

"You should have joined, like you were meant to!" He cried, tears dripped off his face like rainfall falling from a rose bush. "I... I... I'm sorry Gates, I won't ...

nice i thought it was really good i hope ill get to see the other parts to the story soon

thanks ill try writing a whole novel

i think it was nice beceuse thats what normal life is liek

that was a pretty nice story.

Well I did not think I would be standing in the same position ever again. Not like this. But there I stood, five feet from my father. Pull the trigger, ...