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Re: Dark Odyssey
aye at the end i was trying real hard to hurry because i like really had to leave for school but next time ill try and do it on the ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: Ignorance
Ignorance by: Doug Gibboney “Go, Alan. Go and explore the life of mortal humans.” “Yes, Master Juan.” Listen to my story. My story of my ignorant friend. The first day ...
May 19, 2010 -
Re: Lost at Sea
Lost at sea As I woke up one normal morning to the sound of the calming waves and the cries of the morning sea gulls above, I knew today was ...
May 12, 2010 -
Re: Green Tree chapter one
This story caught my attention. It really did. I am a fan of these kind of stories. I might suggest, though, the use of more comas, in my opinion. And ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: The Beginning
I think this story is a really good one, but I feel like its really familiar to me for some reason. I'm not sure about that. But I do think ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: School
This poem explains a lot, and is very true. You did a great job. :mrgreen:
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: Once Upon a Time
It was nice. I liked it in the middle I was caught and hung in the poem. I wish I could write poems some times, but I don't really know ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: Love Bites!
haha you should make that into a song
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: September (Chapter 2)
The only morning I did not dread waking up to, was this one. I woke up with a smile lined across my unchanged face. I have looked the same since ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: Fading Away
I can completely relate, only I was thinking of a girl the whole time.
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Dark Odyssey
thanx
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: September Ch. 1
Thanks ill try to make it less like that because as far as im conserned twilight was really the only book i actually "listened" to and i got a lot ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Silver Moon (Chapter 1: Part 1)
I thought this was an excellent example suspense and I can't wait to hear more from this story.
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Torture
I thought it was really good. I want to read more to like find out whats going on. You did a great job at leaving the audience in suspense.
Mar 28, 2010 -
Re: September Ch. 1
I was sure of three things. Katherine loved me as much as I loved her. Katherine was more attractive then any other girl I have ever laid my eyes upon. ...
Mar 28, 2010
