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there are a lot of good and bad things about your piece 1. You're John not Timmy 2. The comedy and setting still need more fixing......i honestly don't think you ...

very well written from a twitter point of view i do have to say that is by far the best summary of a harry potter book ever written congradulations keep ...

very strong imagery and word usage i felt every word that was written on my screen though it is very brilliant....there is one thing i would fix the last stanza ...

this introduction is very heartfelt and moving i enjoyed it very much Two things to work on: 1. grabbing the attention of the reader instantly 2. bringing key point of ...

Story was pulling on the heartstrings from childhood memories to present tense Though it was strong in the emotional department, it lacked originality and creativity. One must conquer this in ...