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so much emotion conveyed through each and every word this ones a keeper:))) Keep up the good work and never give up!

very good emotional voice you portrayed i felt every word that was written Keep up the good work and NEVER give up.

very well written and is very touching the way you had described the soul and the womans body was very brilliant in comparison to her loneliness she feels Keep up ...

short and still yet very entertaining there is one thing i would add....a twist to your story in the poem....its to ordinary Keep up the good work and never give ...

very well written and definetly pulls at the heartstings Bush....that was a very good touch Keep up the good work and NEVER give up.

sounds intresting and has a very philosophical point of view but i do have to say that honestly i didn't like it one bit especially when medicine is claimed as ...

Writers block is something every writer can relate to and I especially love the way you had written every word to describe how hard it is to write even a ...

sheer force of awesomeness.....not " force of sheer awesomeness" I found your story quite similiar and not very original to other stories i have read in the past. Your story ...

love the way you made all the words rhyme perfectly with each other i felt every word that was written Keep up the good work and NEVER give up.

Definetly very catchy and a thrilling ride :) the poem is well written and as for the grammer.....i don't see any mistakes...yet. Keep up the good work and NEVER give ...

this piece is very well written and i can feel every word written this piece makes it very easy to relate to and as a writer that is one of ...

very well written and as for the could be a tad bit better...for the dialogues that it is I love this piece and how well you described each scene as ...

this is by far the best piece i have read all summer your writing style is very intriguing and your grammer is all put together very well my favorite part ...

well there isn't much to say besides the fact that your poem is clearly not going anywhere maybe you should consider rewriting it to make it more presentable Keep up ...

a very touching and moving poem that touched both my heart and soul Keep up the good work and don't give up.