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Hi all, I'm Louise :). So I was here, then I left, then I came back, then I left again, then I grew up a little and became even stranger ...

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Hi, Chris! (I do like your username yet I type like a snail so it is quicker this way :P) Anyways... Welcome to YWS! Lily has already told you everything ...

Don't listen to all the negative things, I really liked your poem. It wasn't perfect, but it was venting your sorrow. Who cares that it's about a chicken? Just because ...

Wow, I really liked this, the words fit together easily and the rhyming isn't off in one place (that i can see, anyway). Nice work =)

wow, this reads like a fall out boy song, the words are powerful and I understand what you're getting at (That's a big compliment, I love those guys =]) I ...

hi nutmegan! Emo depressing stuff is the bomb, I can never write anything without it going all depressing at the end. Can't wait to read your vampire story! Are you ...

6/10 HSM FTW XD. 1 - I Kissed a Girl - Katy Perry 2 - Heartbeat - Scouting for girls 3 - Teddy Picker - Arctic Monkeys 4 - Room ...

7/10. Variety is the spice of life :D. 1- Homecoming - Kanye West ft. Chris Martin 2 - Let's Dance To Joy Division - The Wombats (One of my favourite ...

Hi, Sarah, welcome to YWS! I'm sure you'll love it here, all of the people are really friendly and help you with your writing quite a lot! So, what music ...

I really liked this, the isolation that they feel is really strong :). Favourite line: I get inside their heads Yet they don’t know I exist And I save their ...

Hope you understand what I'm getting at: Flashy tracksuits and tacky bling, Designer labels adorning everything. Angry faces Under worn caps, Acting on their emotions Without all the facts. Blaring ...

Hi Tay Star and Welcome to YWS! You should check out the help & support section of the site but you should know that you have to review two other ...

Wow, this was really powerful and I enjoyed it =) Couldn't see anything wrong with it tbh. Perhaps you are a demon, a succubus, a hedonistic devil, slowly, quenching your ...

This was a good poem but I think the rhyming could do with a little work. He sheath his sword and stabbed my brother. Holstered his gun and shot my ...