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Oh wow! This is really good! It drew me in and kept me right there. I do think also that it could use a little more conclusion in the end ...

Really interesting! Very suspenseful and mysterious. It got confusing at times but it works. Keep writing!

Great work! I love this! The story was so real. It's too true. Thanks for this great piece. Keep on writing!

Thanks Gracie! I really appreciate the comment. I love writing serious stories even though I love being happy. When I wrote this story I felt very connected to it. I ...

Emily was my best friend. She still will be. When we were 13, Emily found out she had a Glioblastoma multiforme (GBM) brain cancer. The doctors said it was too ...