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The title was very interesting and draws you in. The entire story seems more funny than romantic, which is actually better. The dialogue is amusing and the whole situation is ...

A good title that fits with the story. It was very simplistic which is what you would expect from a young child. At times though it seemed slightly unfoucsed. It ...

An interesting story, not too bad a read. I liked how, especially at the start, you made effective use of short sentances to better mirror the narrators emotions. I think ...

Certainly seeemed to be an approprite title for the poem. Your lines never seemed to be too long or toe short which can happen sometime. There was some rythem (however ...

This here what I behold The blood and the body Is it our Christ of old? Or yet one other tormented soul? Desperatly clinging to a vestige of hope Weakly ...

Well that was certainly interesting, I can see that the wikipedia definition is right when it likens it to a haiku only like extended. I liked the similarity in it ...

Not that bad a poem, I quite liked the description in it especially at the start. Just going to point out now a few things Id have changed or think ...

I like Musicals too, Phantom of the Opera is the best :D

First things first; I'm not all that sure what that was about. That doesn't hinder some form of appreciation of a poem though so my reviews not going to be ...

It was an okay poem, I didn't really like it though. Yes, I'm just about to say it, repitition. It was good at the beginning but then it just started ...

I've said this before and I'm sure I'm going to end up saying it for the rest of today; abbreviating is always good, helps maintain the flow of the poem. ...

Now most people don't realy focus that much if a poem is too long and dismiss it as being bad if it's too short. Yours was a little on the ...

I find that when it comes to poetry it's better to abbreviate like saying it's instead of it is, it helps keep a rythm and pace in the poem. That's ...

Certainly very interesting, the repitition was wearing a bit thin for me though near the end. I mean, I find repitition very effective but after the third time it's used ...

Thank you for both the reviews and I'm sorry the paragraphs were long, I've enevr really been too fantastic on cutting off my paragraphs so apologies, I realize it can ...