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Re: Bleached
Nice job! I enjoyed this, but some parts were a little bit boring but other than that, you had me untill the last word. I really liked this also because ...
Sun Sep 01, 2013 2:23 am -
Re: Caution: Wet Floor
This poem is one word. Great. I love how you rhyme everything, becuase truth behold, i am usually in favor of ryhming poems. I like the amount of detail which ...
Sun Sep 01, 2013 1:30 am -
Re: Awake Part 4
Interesting chapter, and i paticularly enjoy how you tell both sides of the story. Many authore only give you one side of the story but this way, it's easier to ...
Sun Sep 01, 2013 1:08 am
