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Re: Bleached
Nice job! I enjoyed this, but some parts were a little bit boring but other than that, you had me untill the last word. I really liked this also because ...
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Re: Caution: Wet Floor
This poem is one word. Great. I love how you rhyme everything, becuase truth behold, i am usually in favor of ryhming poems. I like the amount of detail which ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: Awake Part 4
Interesting chapter, and i paticularly enjoy how you tell both sides of the story. Many authore only give you one side of the story but this way, it's easier to ...
Sep 1, 2013
