vines-of-beauty

Well done! *claps hands* This poem has meaning, it's not to hard but not to soft....if that makes sense! Anyway, I think you have alot of talent!! You could of ...

Uhm... I thought it was a good story! But you carried on the sentances WAY to much. But well done anyway! *keep rockin* -Megithh

As I sit alone in a dark room, with nothing to look at but my ripped arms. And my lonely heart of stone. I did love him, I did. I ...

Chapter three She stood up, her heart acing; but yet it wasn’t there. She looked in the mirror, and couldn't’t help to think she was beautiful. Her long black hair, ...

I don't like this story, I'm really sorry but it just didn't pop my bubble! it's acctualy a REALLY good idea, but it's not writting well. you can do soooo ...

It's a little short.... But the words are good.

Alright thanksss:P

Thanks guys for the help, I know i use 'yet' to much :o Sorryyyyyyy! :oops:

A Life Left Behind At last I am calm, stressed released from my being. Thoughts are at rest and I feel so alone. Peace at last, a life left behind. ...

So what's the name of this "chrush":P I'm kidding ! Anyway the poem its self is ...well...not bad but not amazing! The idea is perfect, well wait what am i ...

I do agree with everyone else because this poem could really do allot! It's not very strong at the moment, but that can be easily fixed:P It's not very descriptive, ...

Well please remember this is the secound chapter. And i'm going to descripe what she looks like in the third chapter. But i'm confused.... lakegirls I am vines-of-beauty, but you ...

Chapter two Isabelle woke up, with her arms realized and her mouth to be opened. She was surrounded with young infants to the age of 3 to 12, where was ...

Pheble your so mean on your critics! :shock: Maybe she/he wanted to repeat the line! Give her/him a chance she/he said she/he was new! Don't be hasty now! C'mon we ...

Camille! I really liked this!