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Re: i'm feeling unpoetic.
You didn't capitalize the 'I' *has a fit* ALWAYS CAPATILIZE YOUR 'I', IF YOU DON'T THEN IT'S WEIRD READING THE WORK *faints*
Apr 21, 2008 -
Re: Why didn't anyone warn me?
A few grammar related errors, but It was defenitly worth my time.
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Whistle of the Wind, Song of the Rain
Sorry I didn't mean to send that I wasn't finished - - - - - - - - - - - You need to improve on writting image, I know ...
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Whistle of the Wind, Song of the Rain
It needs more of some punctuation, abd I agree with Black star of darkness there isn't really an image
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Waiting to Exhale
Beautiful~ *claps hands*
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: That's all
meh...
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Friendship (revised)
*claps hands* Well done! Bravo! encore! encore!
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: The day that had not a morning.
Boring >.
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Getting Over
I didn't like it all that much, it's not that it wasn't well written because it was, just it's too short. Short but refreshing. Yes, yes short but refreshing... mhm ...
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Our Last Kiss
I have to agree with Cade, this is a dairy entry! Why would we care!? Still, its well written.. Try harder next time. *keep rockin!* -Meg MERG
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Changes
Indeed, it doesn't make alot of sense! but yet its very wonderful:) *keep rockin!" -Meg LLOOOIIPPPP
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Mentality of a dangerous mafia.
This was very good :) *keep rockin!* -Meg NNNEEEERRRRRR
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Blood Heart Chapter three.
Is someone going to say anything...?
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: Talking to Chris
*claps hands* Well done! Wonderful, WONDERFUL *keep rockin* -Megith
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: My Darling
I think that its a well done. But here's how to fix it... Quote: My darling! and if you need me, I’ll be away, darling, away: it means far from ...
Mar 12, 2008