victorianlolita

I adore this movie greatly and was completely heart broken when I learned the truth. Brace yourself kiddo...Anastasia never escaped the siege. The girl who claimed to be her was ...

Suitor, to you I smile and bat my eyelashes as any girl in my position would do. I take your hand as you offer it like you’ve been trained to ...

This is a wonderful thought. I love how you took the meters and made them awkward. Bringing two thoughts from two sentences in one line. The only thing that I ...

I really can't 'critique' this. I simply love it. I love it's movement, it's reiteration, a subtle, powerful touch to each stanza. I adore it greatly. I also love how ...

indention's aren't there =/ sorry all.

CHAPTER 2 In your world, nothing’s set in stone. There is nothing for one to fully own. A certain family falls apart while another ends up at the start; making ...

I hope you all can find out I am responding to both of my newest friends that helped me. I have just noticed something...this is the first draft of my ...

This is a beautiful picture. Some may not like the ruble on the ground, (the sticks and what not) but I find it part of the beach. To me this ...

This is a great poem. I LOVE the first stanza. The second one confused me. "Right when you thought the road stopped right there Right then you almost gave up ...

emmylove, This chapter is a good start. The plot is set and any one can relate to it. There are a few things that could use some jolt though. It ...

Classy, Wow. I cannot thank you enough for your in depth input on the chapter. I wrote it when I was 17. I lost it and now, 4-5 years later, ...

CHAPTER 1 To never see and never hear a tale of a world that lives in fear; the fear of things like gnomes and trolls, or demons that could steal ...