victorianlolita

Kafka it might be wise to read all of my posts on here before putting crap up. Thank you for making my decision on leaving final

Thank you. I did not take that into consideration. It was also reminded to me in a message that the hatemail might have been a younger person who either has ...

Let me clarify: I do not want nice criticism, but I just hate getting messages that are not helpful but downright mean. I did not want this to be a ...

Yes, I do understand every ones point "It's a harsh world, grow the F*** up" what have you. Well when I get paid for some one tearing my stuff apart ...

stop posting on this until I figure out how to delete my account or, at least, this post. Thank you.

Thank you for your comments. How ever this was a free verse. Truthfully I think context is nothing. It does flow well and grammar is nothing without a real good ...

Very well done. Your shading is great. Despite the lack of "detail" in the first one, it's got to be my favorite.

I absolutely LOVE this poem! It's so symbolic (obviously) and so well put. I started reading this hoping to God it wasn't something stupid. I'm not a fan of stupid ...

This is nice and deep. I love the reverse ends, where it's not the girls tragic story being told, its the one who caused the pain. The reaching is a ...

This is a great poem. The imagery of beautiful, then dark, confusion and un-satisfaction is great. I am left not knowing the answer, but that puts me where the writer ...

You are a disney artist in the making! Of course, some are better then others, but all are wonderful. In tangled, the hair is the only thing I didn't believe. ...

I have written something that this reminds me of. I almost want to post it and let you read it. OH wait! I have it on Deviantart. Here's the link ...

It's odd. I love the meaning behind it, but it's chaotic. There is a difference between organized chaos and pure, down right , wtf is that, chaos. Your's leans more ...

You knew I would give in to those sorrowful eyes. You knew I would forgive. I played the game like a broken child with a tattered toy, wanting to fit ...

This is awesome, and I love the title as well. My only suggestion is that you make the features a little more prominent. The nose and such in detail is ...