vicko

Again and again I hear his voice, The years pass by, but it does not show, Maybe is just that I don’t want to, Or because he won’t let go ...

I love the way you describe everything, I was simply caught by the story. :)

I really liked it.Except for the last paragraph,i really think you could have wrotten a better ending. :) though everything else is great!

Really awsome poem. It's original and interesting.Great job :D

Something I came up with for my english project. :D They were looking at the sky, wondering if they should cry. The stars have died, and they couldn’t shine. As ...

Over hill and over dale, Through the tempest, wild gale, The last black horse raced alone Chased by the man, face so pale really liked this part!! :wink:

it's good, but I don't know why I couldn't really feel

ok, thanks for your help...

great 8) poem, it really touched me keep it that way!! :D

Heh thats a creepy cat XD Good poem though :)

I'm new at this so please tell me the truth... Everything is black... I cant see my hand in front of my nose... Something shines above my head, A light. ...