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Re: Dragon Bait
This is a great idea for a story. I think Penelope was a little too calm, but I like how you made her seem so brave. I love the descriptions ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: Waiting to Exhale
This is a beautiful poem. I really liked how you used a box, like how we think in a box. The only thing I saw that you could really improve ...
Apr 6, 2008