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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Dragon Bait

    This is a great idea for a story. I think Penelope was a little too calm, but I like how you made her seem so brave. I love the descriptions ...

    Apr 8, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Waiting to Exhale

    This is a beautiful poem. I really liked how you used a box, like how we think in a box. The only thing I saw that you could really improve ...

    Apr 6, 2008


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price