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Re: The Letter.
I don't think he was being wimpy. I think he was being a true man. The fact that he's sharing this story with his mother says that he has a ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: The Elements
I really like your story. You've got me hooked. I honestly don't see anything wrong with it. I saw how you've been improving each chapter by listening to the constructive ...
Apr 5, 2008 -
Re: Nevermind
Great story! I really liked how you made Holly so innocent, e.g. Not knowing what a seat belt was, reacting as she did to the Tranquilizer gun. I also liked ...
Apr 3, 2008