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A.N. Sasuke1214 will not be in the story book for a while so thats why I sent his character off on some mission to find another hybrid. So if you ...

~ZANE~ "Yes, I am Zane. and what would your name be?" I said, trying to say something intelligent. "I'm Jase, where am I?" "You are in the headquarters of The ...

~SYVILIOUS~ I hear a crash from the next room over. It was the room occupied by the new girl. I rush out of my room and into the hallway. I ...

~SYVILIOUS~ I hear a voice outside my room, it is Kratos. "Hey Syv, Zane wants us to make a room for a leopard, since room 5 is the next one ...

~ZANE~ I get out of the building with not much time to spare. As I run from the building I call up Kratos. "Hey bro, I need a room for ...

A.N. SIC, you can bring yourself in, but you might want to be in another country or state and you can meet up with us later. also...after much thought and ...

PROLOGUE 2 years before actual story Five scientists were huddled around an operating table. On the table was a boy who looked around 13. This boy, was a vampire. And ...

hey Lupe...it's me again...and i'm reviewing/critiquing your stuff...i'm like a stalker aren't i? but it isn't stalking cause i know you want me to follow you... A growl slipped past ...

hey Senri! im Dan/Vamplord/Vampy/Pantherboy/Pink Panther (you would get those last two by being in the chat with me) welcome to YWS! if you need any crits. or reviews im here ...

Description of storyline: scientists who know about the creatures of the night have come to discover a new type of scientific uses: fusing the vampire race with that of an ...

i like is a start to a very good story, and to agree with Wolf...you do have some spelling errors in there that you need to fix, and since you ...

this was a very good story...i liked how there was the twist on the life of an assassin and what could potentially happen if you were to become one. the ...

very good...since so far i have read all the books in the twilight series...this has great detail coming from the books...nice job and keep writing ~Dan

i can easily see that jabberhut and psychicninja had a lot to say about this...but i will make this short...correct the misspellings and continue with the story...i would really like ...

well...since i dont like my parents i would let them be taken...but if i had to have them to survive...then i would try to rescue them what would you do ...