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Avatar the last airbender! duh! I love that show! 'Cause its Sakah! ok Unsterblichkeit36

Um this morning. Then i went swimming in a disgusting lagoon with jellyfish and some unknown creatures. After that, I jumped in my shower for about two minutes and just ...

Eh...They kinda' freak me out. The person below me has to go to the bathroom?

Emphasis and character! Of course swearing is good! It's actually excellent! It adds character and emphasis to your characters. What are you supposed to say? "The meanies were waiting down ...

Beat My father barged through the door. I heard bottles clanking together and stepped out of my room. My father looked drunk to me. He wobbled and I kept my ...

I liked how you made the structure so insignificant and separated every little detail but i did notice one mistake He still gives me the butterflis, too. It should be ...

I think it should be: "Because i am a stranger to you, I am the oppressed." Well that's what I think. It was a very powerful and beautiful poem and ...

Since i get no sleep at all, i do write half asleep all the time. I actually wrote around two 45 in the morning today and wrote an amazing piece. ...

Wow. One simple word; wow. I have never read a poem so intriguing and inspiring. That was beautiful. Probably one of the most beautiful poems i had ever read. If ...

hey it was a good poem and i made this mistake when i first started you are supposed to do two reviews before u post anything and then you are ...

Do you love me with your heart, Or love me with your eyes? Was i cute from the start, Or did you listen to my cries? Will you hold me ...

I was up until four thirty writing and almost fell asleep on the keyboard. that would have ruined my writing and the computer drastically. I had to go find gum ...

suzanne, that was one rude coment

how i wish i could draw like that The bottom is beautiful, but the top twilight thing is a bit eek

I liked the last stanza Its what had caught my eye the most For some reason I always like the ends of poems