unsocialbutterfly

hi! :) This story was pretty good. It was really cute. There are some mistakes in grammar but other than that it's cute. :) Examples: as she smiled at me ...

That's a really great poem. I liked how you used an example of where you opened it to. :)

Overall it's pretty good it's a good story and I'm pretty sure everyone already corrected the mistakes I saw :)

hey :) This is pretty well written but it kind of sounds more like a poem than a short story it is pretty good though I like the fact that ...

*Now before I begin please know that I started writing this when I was about 6 or 7 years old so don't expect it to be a great book okay. ...

Hey I'm a newbie I don't know what else to say besides read my profile and you'll find out about me :)