unsocialbutterfly

Those are gorgeous. My top favorite are definitely the bubble, the seagull, and the tree. Really good.

I think that's beautiful you're so lucky that you can draw.

I think that's gorgeous.

That's really, really nice. The only thing is maybe.... "And see THE life in her eyes"??? It's really beautiful though. :)

haha ok just so everyone knows I didn't purposefully just like my own poem just so you know. I didn't know what I was doing haha :) If you don't ...

Alright so I have to write a poem for my writing class and well poems aren't my thing I really don't stick to any rules when I write, I just ...

Your second chapter was pretty good. I'm glad you kept writing. The first chapter was tough but I saw you edited it. I don't think I have anymore to add ...

Ok again the story is really called Untitled and again you'll see why at the end :) If you haven't read my first chapter check it out please!! ♥ "So ...

Your story seemed pretty good to me. Keep writing I want to know what happens ;) Here's what I noticed could need a little improvement: slammed my locker door and ...

Hi! Your writing seems pretty good. I did notice that this sentence just doesn't sound right. Any one in this family rarely goes up there, as to disturb her as ...

Your poem is pretty good. :) I'm really sorry about your mom :/But anyway about your poem it's pretty good but like when you say "you get soaked with all ...

That's a really pretty and inspiring piece. There's a comma at the end though so did you do it on purpose or is there more to it? Other than that ...

Okay so I'm kind of writing 2 different novels and the one chapter of my novel is in with my other chapter of a totally different book so how do ...

[*]The name is really Untitled. You'll understand why after I finish it. :) I have official made all the changes :) I hope you like it! When I woke up ...

Wow. That's a great poem. You're really talented. Keep writing! :)